Tuesday 12 March 2013

The Dog Who Chased Lightning

The Dog Who Chased Lightning is a story about a girl named May and her dog named Midge.  One cold night, the lights went out so May went under her bed and found a torch. It was the one that she would kept for emergencies. As soon as she came outside Midge was in the dark, he was running everywhere May said “it’s okay boy I have a torch”.

May turned the torch on and Midge was chasing the light, that was the time when May found out that he loved the torch light. Then May took Midge to the park, and as soon as they got there it was raining. Suddenly, lightning flashed and midge was jumping everywhere. Midge went mangos! He was jumping like crazy and running everywhere.

6 comments:

  1. Well done Liz! You have really shown that you can write a summary about the story you have just read. It shows that you understood the text well.

    Kai Pai,

    Miss Ouano :)

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  2. Hi liz! I love your work that you did it was great I love the your drawing it looks cool. from lucy

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  3. Hay Liz!!! Great work on your fabulous story. I really love the details and the characters also nice picture. Keep it up Liz!!!

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