My Mum is a softy but can also be tough . She loves caring for other people, she is always is nice but sometimes she can be mad when me and my brother fight but she helps us. My Mum loves to go to church. She is the best Mum I have ever had.
My Dad is very helpful and caring but he is very tough when it comes to the tv. He loves watching rugby and sports his favorite team is the Cook Islands and the All Blacks. My Dad love to clean the house and loves to cook. Dad is the best Dad I can ask for he loves to look after us and give us hugs.
This is the 4 this I want to do to make my sentences better
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Hi liz keep working on your writing
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